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If I am understanding your poem correctly, you are a victim of sexual abuse by one or more of your parents. If this is the case, you must take immediate action to stop it. You should not feel ashamed or guilty if this has happened, as it is in no way your fault. What you must do is tell a teacher you trust what is going on and ask for help. If you don't have a teacher you trust, ask to speak to your school counselor, and ask him/her to help you. Both will want to help you. If you cannot do this, when you are alone, dial 911 and tell the person that answers what is going on, and they will send someone to help you. You can also call information (it should be 411, or "o" for the operator) and ask for Child Protective Service's phone number, call them and tell them what's going on. Good luck.